I like this, I don't like this.
Strange way to describe something but it ticks a lot of boxes (no pun intended) for me, the shape, colouring etc., all work.
The bit that fails is the calligraphy. The Chinese are so careful about their writing that to do it as pyrography (stuttering dots) and lose the fluidness of the drawn words when done with inks looks wrong, which is a shame for something that is otherwise quite right looking.
Another question that needs asking is 'Do the words say or mean anything, or are they just made up shapes?' I've seen instances where random Chinese words have been tattooed onto someone and the meaning is really quite rude or stupid. I'd hate for this to be seen by a reader of Chinese and have it say something 'wrong'.