wider I appreciate what you are trying to achieve here and it has worked to a certain extent but not enough to show up much. I applaud the fact that you are experimenting with your turnings but looking closer at this piece I can see that there is torn grain and unfinished or poorly finished areas. I think you would be better placed if you concentrated on form and finish and basically learn your trade craft before branching out into the more challenging aspects of the craft.
This is meant to be a positive critique thst will allow you in due course to produce the ideas that you obviously have.
