Hi Bryan
I hope you are well. Your practice is coming on and thank you for sharing.
I rarely give critique to pieces on forums as I believe we all have personal tastes and most of it is subjective. Self critique through observation of the work we enjoy and by exploring related subjects is some times more helpful for us to progress in our ideas and methods.
Just because I think something should be done in a certain way does not mean I am right, obviously there are sound guides in relation to form, proportion and composition but these are guides that may or may not work in certain situations. I also listen to my immediate feelings about a piece a after a few seconds our subjective side takes over.
Keep making and enjoying the process as you are doing well. With my work I try to refine each piece just a little compared to the last. I look at it, see what I like and what I don't, jot it down and see if I feel the same way the next day, leave it on a shelf for a week or so so I can look at it and then try to tweak it a bit hopefully for the better.
Over the years I have found that the things I like about my work change and now I may not like what I was turning a couple of years ago. I guess it is a continuous path we tread that will never end.
Keep hollowing, and if you are ever down this way in sunny Dorset give me a call and come have a cuppa and we can chew the cud and make some shaving. I may manage to get myself up to the club as and when I get my latest project finished which is taking all my time.
Apologies I have run off on one.